Beat it last night. Spoilers below:
I thought the story fizzled out towards the end. There wasn't really any big pay off and ultimately nothing really gets resolved. Sure all of the characters who put you into these situations wind up dead but it is done in the fastest way possible with only Devin's having some actual meat to it.
I thought the three main characters were really well written outside of a few moments. Trevor killing Floyd and Cindy felt really out of place and to me was worse than the torture scene. Didn't feel like him killing them was justified as they had not done anything to wrong him.
Overall the game was a fantastic experience but thinking about the story as a whole does leave me a bit disappointed.
Yep. I agree entirely.
The character writing is great, but the narrative is muddled and poor. And, at the end, these big characters turn into blips on the radar you can just kill. Lazy.