Yoshichan said:
Got it. Okay I uploaded it for anyone who wants to see my scrubby ass. This is usually how every game I play is so... yeah.
https://www.yousendit.com/download/dXFYNnFOQ1I4aU94dnc9PQ
Also, PLEASE don't mind the "fuck you" in the end of the video :lol I'm usually not like that but I was really pissed off there...
I'm afraid I'm going to be quite blunt here.
1) Right off the bat your build order is really bad. You waited way too long to get your first pylon.
You're getting double gas WAY too early for no reason at all. Think about it. You have 400+ gas when your first gateway finished. That's not good at all because you can't even pump out Stalkers or Sentries until your Cybernetics Core comes up.
2)
Way too much focus on micro. When you out with your army, you should NOT be watching your army so much. When you were pushing out with your Zealot/Sentry army, not once did you go back to your base and pump out more units. That's really bad because if you lose a battle, then you would not have an army in time back home to defend.
3)
You had THREE warpgates. How did you feel when you lost that battle and you went back to your base to build units only to find out that you could only pump out 3 units? That's really bad. Get more warpgates. You had 1000+ minerals/gas in the bank.
4) No tech. No upgrade. No expansion.
You're not a bad player, you just lack experience.