Overall, I liked the story. It wasn't mind blowing or anything close to that, but it was really fun to watch unfold and I loved how many plot twists it had. lol This is the Lifehold where other people are...actually, even us are there... well, only our datas are there... And then, there was nothing in it. lol I love the potential for a sequel, even though I doubt it will happen, at least anytime soon. So, Mira was the reason that a lot of things happened and not even Elma knows why. That's really interesting. Also, there's still the mystery of that Telethia Plume that saved us when the Sphinx appeared, but I'm not sure if it even has a story as it's a level 99 (final I guess) boss.
About Elma, that was quite unexpected. She was weird and she looked alienish with those silver hairs but damn, I didn't expect her to actually be an alien. lol I was thinking that aliens were somehow involved, because even the Ganglion kept praising the human technology, but I didn't expect Emma to actually be one. In around the start, after a quest I think, she said something about her body being surprising but I only just remembered it after the credits. lol
About Law, I'm actually surprised he was so relevant to the story. And I didn't expect him to return to the end and be the final boss. lol I feel the main story focused on him quite a lot, but other than the fact people keep trusting him while he was obviously traitorous from quite early, I don't have a problem with it. I'm not sure what happened in the end to him(I closed the game right after it saved), but did he wake up as himself or it's something else? His eyes were abnormally black...