You know what would probably make him less good at swordfighting and emotionally distressed
-Being berated for his decisions multiple times
-Being resisted by another force user, who he hasn't seen in years
-Wanting guidance from the dark side of the force but not receiving it
-Needing help to fully embrace the dark side
-Killing his father and then being forgiven directly afterwards
-Getting shot in the abdomen
-Seeing the two directly responsible for his current predicament, including the one he's supposed to capture
-The emotional anger caused by seeing "his birthright" used by a stormtrooper
-Getting further wounded by said stormtrooper in his dominant arm
-Being so distressed that he can't even use force pull correctly
-Seeing yet another person use "his birthright"
All of these things are directly spelled out on screen during the film yet people are acting like the dude was perfectly fine from the onset or that the point wasn't to tear him down and show that while he has potential he is not Darth Vader's equal.
Once again, the only one who questioned him at all before he met Naruto was Hux. Once he met her, apparently his character just became a bumbling loser who can't control his emotions and forgets how to use the force at the most convenient times. As I said earlier again, if people insist on comparing this movie to A New Hope, Kylo Ren showcased a much greater command of the force than Vader did.
The one you're ignoring.
Kinda like how you initially ignored Veelk's post in the spoiler thread in order to maintain the stance you're still taking now.
I didn't ignore anything. I read a lot of it and he was going on about Bella Swan being the center of a story and black hole characters.... that isn't what I am talking about. I even quoted the defined version of Mary Sue that I am talking about.
"A Mary Sue or, in case of a male, Gary Stu or Marty Stu is an idealized fictional character, a young or low-rank person who saves the day through extraordinary abilities."
That is the first sentence on wikipedia. Did she not:
Save BB-8 from the scrapper?
Save them from the tie fighters?
Save them from the poison gas?
Save Finn from the whatever the hell that was?
Save the Falcon from exploding?
Save the map data from Kylo Ren?
Save herself from capture?
Disable the door locks in about 10 seconds flat on the top secret First Order facility?
Save herself and Finn from Kylo Ren in a light saber battle?
She was saving everyone the entire movie. nothing said about being perfect, not making mistakes or having the entire story revolve around her.
I think I need to step back and state that I usually don't even let this kind of stuff bother me, and I did enjoy the movie as dumb as it was. I like the Ethan Hunts and the John Matrixes just as much as the next guy. You have to properly frame it, however, and execute it gracefully. This was not done in such a manner. She was an example of the worst of it. Just a new blood stumbling from rough situation to rough situation, solving them in record time.